I am going to take you on a virtual trip around my room. I opened the door, it creaked and made a sound like someone's fingers on a chalk board. These windows have a beautiful view in spring when all of the flowers have bloomed. I have a bed right in the middle of my squarish room, which takes up quite a bit of space, but I like it that way. When I get up in the morning to go to school, or after a big sleep-in, my toes touch the soft dark carpet. I have a black carpet with a white lines diagonally going through it. The ideas are great and relevant to the topic. No one can get in except for me. I have a gray shelving unit and an old looking bed side table. It's Romeo's line about his inamorata: "Juliet is the sun." Next my colours that live in by bedroom let me think, oh yea beige and blue. My miniature dog and cow sculptures sitting on my desk beginning to gather dust. Remember to carefully proof-read and edit your work. Beside my bed is a little white bedside table housing a wide variety of items mainly things I couldnt be bothered to put away. I hate tidying my room but this is something that needs to be done more often. Many people have bedrooms and many people look at theirs differently but we all have something that makes our own bedrooms ours. On the top end there is two pillows and a bundle of pijamas. Although in the second paragraph you could have stated what you were talking about a bit better. My bed is really soft and comfy, just the way I like it. The cushions on my bed are very soft and have a sponge texture. Sometimes my siblings come into my room but they dont stay for long because they are too noisy so they get kicked out. The carpet is a soft grey colour with a squishy texture. The fresh air circulates the room which gives me a sense of new and relaxation. You might go to a spa retreat or meditation retreat to escape from the world and get some relaxation. You can imagine someone who has just installed a brand new security system might say: my home is a vault! Also some of you words are slept wrong or used in the wrong context. You need to work on capital letters (eg. What Type Of Muzzleloading Firearm Is The Most Popular And Most Commonly Used Among Hunters Today?, So, you could imagine someone who has just put lights all over their house standing back, looking at it, and remarking: my home is now a Christmas tree!, Another time you might use this is if you drive up your driveway to your home and see that all the lights are on inside. When did organ music become associated with baseball? You might walk in and say, Why is my home a Christmas tree? You may find me laying there reading a book in the natural light coming through my window, which is my main source of light. As Ive already said I have a painting of Clifton Beach hanging above my bed, it is landscape and the colours combinations are awesome. My most favorite piece of furniture in my room is most definitely my bed because its where I spend most of my time and when you spend time with something like that for that long you're sure to end up getting attached to it, but anyway my bed is my favorite thing in my room because its warm when I want warm and cool when I want cool and plus its majorly comfy. I like how much description is in your writing, mabey next time dont keep repeating your self, Use used I little bit of complex vocabulary but not a lot. On the left hand side is a bunk bed which has Jacksons (my little brother) bed at the bottom and my bed at the top with really messy covers. The shark's teeth are daggers. Around the corner from my desk there is a window bay couch that is navy blue, across from the couch there is my Aqua chair covered in rugs and pillows. In my room I have a new wooden drawers and white shelves beside. But you made a lot of punctuation mistakes and spelling mistakes. Love reading your stories as always! My bed, My bed is a single bed it is in my opinion very noisy but also very comfy. By William Wightman 8WH. There are ups and downs but it is where I feel safe and calm. But Im lucky enough to have an en suite attached to my room! The color of it is a creamy vanilla look but its actually a bright yellow. But I would like to get rid of the hole and change the wallpaper, also I want a tv. The bit that gets me, is how can one person be so messy?! Quite an old room perhaps. The size of my bed is a king single. I, myself, like my room a lot, its not perfect but its very me and its filled with things I love like sport and photography. My wall color is a nice light sea blue color I wouldn't change anything about it. The next best thing about my bedroom is the accessories that make the room mine. you have structured you description writing and have a bit of punctuation mistakes 3+. My colors, I like the choice of colors that are in my bedroom. This simile is used to describe the letters Roland and Maud find at Seal Court, in Christabel's It has a great layout because of the way that my comfy double bed gets most of the sun.As you open the door to my bedroom a sudden warmth invites you in. The storage is great because it is hidden away above my wardrobe, which is built into the wall, although most of my stuff goes under the bed. Try next time to make some of your objects more descriptive and not just the colours. My room is a square room and is medium sized, I am lucky enough that I have it all to myself. Some people might call this theme a colourful mess, but I think otherwise. I bet your glad to get out of your old room. My bedroom it is comfortable, warm and quite tidy, yes its tidy so let me explain the wondrous wonders of my bedroom. My blinds are a creamy, white colour that go all the way to the floor. So let's explore the den people called my room. I have a double bed,white covers and matching pillows to my starry bed which is navy blue and white spots sprinkled all over It. No need to be fancy, just an overview. And I would try and keep it a bit more tidy! Describe The Room Your In Describe the room you are in Dark, empty and cool; I gaze ahead at the room before me, with only the sound of the air conditioner thrumming. It all fits nicely in my room and nothing looks too squished. My black guitar leans up against my drawers and on top of my drawers there is an orange word that says Brave. Williams Bedroom My bed is nearly always made. I like how you have used lots of descriptive words. You only had three simple senses that were not very detailed and I think you could have added more detail about the noise and smell and sight in your room. Reubens bedroom description I love it because it is the only room in my house where I can lock myself away from the rest of the world. The rooms style of the room is old rugged modern and not really cared about but that's what makes it mine. The cleanliness of my bedroom is pretty good, but sometimes my football gear is left outside my wardrobe on the floor. I liked the simple ideas of your description as they stuck to what they were made for and didn't go off topic The tabletop itself is dusty with dried gum and I think even an empty skittles packet. Personally I really like my room. merger arbitrage analyst; the secrets of the The room has a big space to go around in and has the hobbies I like.but best of all is to spend time with yourself and always relax after a long day. and at night when it's extremely cold I turn on my speedy heating friend my electric blanket and snuggle right down into my black and white duvet and my purple fluffy sheets. So, now the walls. The final part of the room is the space, the space of the room is kinda small which is a good thing because that mean that I can do cool ping pong trick shots. Light, open, spacious and its mine. In general, one might get the idea that metaphors are preferred to describe a bad user experience rather than a good one. when you said mental trip you were bang on. On the board there is flowers carved on them. I like the clear description, so it's easy to visualise. Your writing is very descriptive. Yes it can be very messy and there are times I cannot stand that mess any more so I tidy it. Shoes and clothes that I was too lazy to put back in draws in a bunch on the floor in front of it. They are stacked up quite messily. It smells like fresh vanilla because of the bowl of dried petals and shells that have been smothered with air freshener. Awards are the next important thing that has to be hung up to admire the things I have done. Now my bedroom has amazing accessories such as the the useful charger plug built into the wall! Next to my desk is a black and white Beanbag chair where I sit when Im either reading or watching Netflix. Not quite how I see your room - it is a typical boys bedroom with a LOT of mess on the floor and you also forgot to say that you chuck stuff under your bed as well as the "random drawers"! I also have surfing posters around the room of surfers that I admire and aspire to be like someday. Sleep Tight If you tuck the There's flower patterns everywhere and unique designs on my furniture. The darkness at specific times, so as I said it can get dark fast, I have to use my lighting module just to make it look like its still daylight, it gets annoying sometimes, you just got home and you go in your room and you cant find the light (By the way my hallway light is a sensor light). Maybe expand on some of these so we know more detail eg: what type of animals can you hear? In my room I have my school bags. In my room there can sometimes be a lot of space when my room is clean but when it is untidy there is literally not space because of the stuff on the floor. It is my favourite part of my house because I can do what I like in there, and yet not get disturbed. Thirdly, the colors. Their curtains black out light, their chairs all face the television, theres surround sound speakers, and of course theres an enormous flat screen TV on the wall! Above the irritatingly tall line of trees, the tip of Mt Hutt is just visible, its snowy peak nudging the sky. I liked the way you captured the masculine feel of the bedroom. must suck cock. Brookes Bedroom Description If you want to read a book from my bookshelf you can, but most of the good ones probably would've slipped down behind it,along with anything you sit on top of my bookshelf. I move things around to make it look tidy. My favourite was the accessories it was funny. In my room you would hear gunshots roaring from my TV. , It is a great description and edited well. I also love my reading area and the way that my half of the of my bedroom gets most of the sun. Sophies Bedroom Over by the side of the wall is my birth certificate that is framed and it tells me the meaning of my name where it originated from and a paragraph about who I am and stuff about me. I share my bedroom with my one year old brother Walter and I manage to keep it reasonably tidy. There was a couple of spelling mistakes though. The bright stuff in my room are mainly the walls, desk and drawers, my room gets a lot brighter when I open the curtains because my windows are a basically a wall itself, but with a window that big everything ends up being brighter during the day and night in the summer which is a problem (even with the curtains pulled). Sometimes in the mornings it can be really cold but when that heat pump goes on it makes it better. So I think that my bedroom is good because it is big and warm and I like how it is big enough to fit like 6 or more double beds in it so I can have a lot of friends round. Good job colt. On the far wall where the window is there is beautiful multi-coloured painting of a cow and in the right hand wall there is a small built in wardrobe with a mirror on one of the doors and on the other there is the same deep sea green as on my feature wall. You described thing very well. Under this window is my computer desk with a small draw and a slot for a keyboard giving a nice place to work. You just need to open up your curtains more to get the better light. So my bedroom might be small, but for now its just way I want it. When you say your home is a swamp, you usually mean that its messy, dark, and maybe even a little smelly. Really good writing, I can picture your room very clearly. There is a popular Australian movie called The Castle that uses this metaphor in the title. I have a globe lamp on top of my chest of drawers but the bulb in it broke so its all taken apart, sitting next to it is my 3D colosseum puzzle. My favorite things in my room are the pink wallpaper, the cool view outside my window because there are lots of cool trees and my bed's really comfortable because it has a soft mattress, there is also a cool windowsill that you can sit on and look at those beautiful trees. My room has a hint of rotten food in it to make sure my sister will stay out and it has smelly clothes all over the floor. My bedroom is special to me because it's where I can go to get alone time and just relax it's pretty smelly but it's a cozy warm layout that is just for me. This is placed in the left hand corner underneath my window. Im at home in the forest uses those associations we have of home (comfort, relaxation) and apply them to the outdoors. Sometimes I play music from my bluetooth speaker and my brother comes in and screams and dances along to the music. It also has another mattress underneath that has wheels on it. Your vocabulary was really good, you used nouns and adjectives well. He is a pig. Maybe because it has two duvets on it and the sun is shining on it. I think that as soon as I was reading the first paragraph it was full of punctuation's. 4+. There are many spaces of my room everything from cloths on the draws and my bed in the corner. cock is life. It has a dark deep blue background with the flowers painted in a yellow so light it is almost white, the brush strokes carefully placed to show the wind gently blowing the flowers. You can imagine a mother of 3 or 4 children calling her home a zoo. My bed is the most comfortable and cosy thing in my whole entire room. Decorations fill the room with topics, happiness, colours and hobbies. The carpet packs a warm feel to the room as it completes it and gives it a nice finish. A time where I can focus on myself and feel peace. The simplest way to make a metaphor is to use this pattern: First noun + to be verb + a/an + second noun She is an angel. To call your home a dump is to say that its a complete mess! It use to be an old garage but was renovated into a bedroom that Im proud to call it mine. A wooden bedside table [that I mention before.] I love my room and everyone loves their room but me living in newly renovated garage is great but has some downsides to it. You have had a few rooms in your life and you know how to to make yourself feel at home easily. My bedside table is cream with a draw that is woven and basket like. For me and my sisters to fit in our room the room has to be laid out a specific way, but it is pretty comfy. This bed is a queen sized bed but I have another king single bed for any friends that come around which is always made perfect. I like how I am able to visualize your bedroom. There is a queen single bed covered in a white duvet and patterned blanket in the centre. But then there's homework but you can still do it in your room on your bed or desk. There is a bold yellow pikachu stuffed toy next to my pillows and an All Blacks blanket covers the rest of my bed and you can see the light blue sheets peeking out of the head end of my bed. I think its very organised also it makes it feel spacious. What I would really like though is some more storage because there is not a lot of space to put my belongings. I love the way you have proven that your room is one of your favourite places. Cartoon drawings load the wall that I've drawn in my spare time, the weekends for a hobby. But this is a bad thing for me because my bed is as you know against a window which means freezing water goes into my covers at night. ALYSSAS BEDROOM The color of the carpet is a dark grey which goes with the furniture and the color of the walls. I have to share my room with two other people and its kind of small in width. I personally like the way my bedroom feels and looks. Lastly is the layout. LEARNING WITH MRS STAPLES@ MT HUTT COLLEGE, METHVEN. well done kaden it does sound like your room. And now the style of my bedroom and what I love about it. As you enter my bedroom the first thing you see is the large divider that sits in the middle of my room separating my sister and I. In my room I have a blue, round mat that my cat likes to sleep on. When you walk in my room you will see a white door and when you walk in the main area all the walls are white with dark furniture. My bedroom is small but everything fits in it. Overall I love my room just the way it is. My bedroom isnt so great. My books are bright and colourful so they stand out, all of them are different colours. The wall opposite the door has three picture that me and my sisters had painted quite a while ago. My room is the smallest in the house but I love my room just the way it is. It is made of pine so is a rather light golden brown in colour. I roll around on it and it feels great. On the other side of my bed, sits the divider that holds all of my well-loved books and DVDs. Its a blue 3 person couch with blue, red, and green lines all [around the couch and it unfolds into a king size bed when unfolded. There is a mirror hanging on my off white walls above a small table. My king-single bed is placed directly in the middle of my room with my dresser, containing all of my clothes, on the left hand side. Three things that are very special to me is my necklaces and a bracelet. The second one is abstract art that I made about a year ago when I was bored, and the third one is a tree with a swing, I made it when I was year 6 and I entered it into the amp show and I got 2nd. The only way my room is brightened up is by having furniture with colour. Pagkakaiba ng pagsulat ng ulat at sulating pananaliksik? I like my bedroom just the way it is. When I walk into my room all I can smell is dirty sweaty clothes. Next to my bed is a cabinet and some draws next to that. My bed is NEVER made properly, (unless mum makes it for me.) I have all my electronics are sitting next to my bed charging like my computer and my phone and ipad . But all my room is really for is sleeping and playing Xbox. Apart from mum and dad's room my room is the only room with a double bed as well, I think my room is very unique and bright and I like it. It has a very comfy mattress and white sheets. I would give you a rubric R4 mark. I have white walls and chocolate brown curtains. What a great description of your beautiful bedroom! There is also a bit a sporty feel because of all the sports gear. The ground. Creamy brown and soft those are just few words I would use to describe my carpet it is great for my hard feet. The cleanliness of my room is great but with a small amount of clothes on the ground. The furniture is really comfy and I really like it. Writing By Brody Kershaw. Its nice to get up to something like that. Your spelling needs some tweaking but overall I think you've done really well :). On the floor there is all my stuff for my I-Pod and I-Phone like my charger and headphones which are plain white and usually tangled up. It had a lot of descriptive words in it. The floor is usually covered in clothes and rubbish. I stroll into my room and the bright colours instantly pop out. Brooke, I like the way you used your vocabulary skills. Next to that is a deceptive worktop. Messy ,Modern and comforting thats how i would describe my bedroom. There is the washing machine and all the dirty clothes from the laundry in my room because our new house is very small. Overall I think my room is an amazing space and deserves a lot more love and cleaning to keep it in peak condition. The walls of my room are brown and the door is white the a gray handle. I'm not saying my bedroom is small it's just not big enough for all my bits and bobs. I have two windows in my room one facing straight ahead of you as you walk in and the other one above the bed. Every morning I need to make sure my bed is neat and tidy. Well I think it's there to get a good view of our old house, right next door! Teatukuras bedroom The creamy brown carpet is pleasant. Overall well done. I would probably just proofread your work before submitting it. The colour and brightness are perfect in mostly every way possible. My carpet has black and brown stripes and is squishy and soft. This is placed flush against the left hand wall and is filled with many treasures. Chargers, Polaroid, medals and cards are a big part of my accessories. Warmth of a Smile (Simile) Jack likes listening to different stories of his Grandma, and when he speaks with her, Jack notices that lines around her mouth are like sun rays. This comparison illuminates the fact that his Grandma is a good-natured and kind person whose kindness warms like sun rays. Good job! Well my room is very messy I hate tidying my room I alway have clothes all over the floor. Feed-forward - You didn't put as much detail as you should've and there was a few spelling mistakes, you need to put a bit more detail and go over it to make sure you haven't got any spelling mistakes. 4-Because you had good adjectives. I have a black bed side table that is woodin and I have a plastic clock, then I have a grey alarm clock that I really dislike because it wakes me up and I don't like getting up. Overall I give you a 4. Megan your vocab was very good with describing things. My wardrobe is a double sliding door with a grey color. The couch in the corner is also like a trunk that holds most my stuff. A normal room for a 13 year old. Right as you walk through the door you will notice the feature wall, its brown background with white and dark green flowers on it. oh lick that creamy cock, Below you will understand what is important, the idea provides one of the links with an exciting site: . I have a COD (Call of Duty) BO3 poster a COD 4 Remastered poster and my certificates of every school I ever went to. If you walk into my room your senses would explode because of the smell, sight, sound, touch. I have a blue stegosaurus lampshade, a monitor and PS4, a TV and even a bulletin board. You could improve on adding more ideas and making them a bit more interesting. But you a lot of descriptive words. And I don't think you would want to touch anything in my room it would give you an odor you couldn't even imagine. When I walk into my room I feel alone and relaxed. The reason why it is so special to me is that my mothers friend gave it to me from Australia. I could clearly see your room just by the way you described it. My duvet has many colours and matches everything in my room, including my bright pink beanbag. It has a dark theme and it has black sheets and gray covers. It's good that he loves his room and his own space. The brown carpet matches the old wooden skirting. I liked some of the words you used like; zooming, convenient and belongings. Then straight ahead you will see my drawers with three pukeko statues and some other items. On the rubric I would give you a R4. Next to that rug is my bean bag which is blue with a flame on it which is also blue. It is strewn with piles of clothes and virtually impossible to walk through. One of the necklaces is a sharp sharks tooth from Cairns and a golden dragon necklace from Yorkshire. I think you have used some good verbs to describe your room and it has lots of information. There are three brass coloured wall lamps scattered around the room that have been pulled out their sockets and painted under, there are small clusters of hooks and hangers ready for decoration like a wonderful poster and a few of my creations from school. My parents will not let me turn up the heat. The other decoration in bedroom is my average size mirror which has lots of writing on it so I can remember what I need to do. My room is the perfect size for all my things and for me and thats how I like it. I think your writing has really improved this year. The next thing you eyes will find is my small black bedside table. good work. This usually means that there is a mess all over the floor. Dotted around my room are a bunch of different things. I have a foam pillow, so my head just sinks in. The blankets on my bed are very colourful there is a bright red, white and grey striped blanket, a soft pink one and a plain white one. 1. as big as a castle. Under the small window is my bed and to the left of the bed is my small bedside table with my grey shaded lamp on top. I have fairy lights that are pink and gold, my desk is blue while my chair is a lime green. I love my bed to bits (literally my cats rip it to pieces) You did'n't go into detail about your furniture we don't know what patterns or colours they are. I like the fact that all your ideas were relevant and made sense to the topic. The rest of the walls are a nice white color and it goes with the furniture that is against it. The layout of my bedroom is great but i dont like it. Whether it be the theme, the walls, the layout or just your favorite item in it. In my room we have really ugly wall paper, it is green and white, but ugly green. -3, Brody, I like your writing. List of Metaphors for Home. My walls are a creamy white color they fit very well with my room. It is a square shape and it is warm. My bed is on the right hand side of my door, and when I wake up the sun is shining in my eyes because the window is opposite to my bed. I really enjoy your description jake I can visualize your bedroom very well. My desk is white with a blue frame, and is surfaced with rusty foreign coins, a USB and a dusty rubber tiger. September 2014. In your writing I have noticed that you need to improve the proper use of functuation. Clothes stuffed half in and half hanging out of the draws. My room is filled with colours I love like yellow, green and BLUE. I am happy that I have a couch in my room it helps my back I dont know how but it does, sometimes it's easy to fall asleep on it after a long day of work. There are also some capital letters that are in the wrong place. They make their stories real by allowing us to experience Which I have owned for a year now but it is really loud. The Ideas are relevant but I would like to see more elaborated Ideas in the text. Ok I have got a lot of things in my room but some of my favorites are the accessories. But when you're the oldest the youngest gets your room when you move out and it usually the best room in the house. The style of my room is perfect. No faults with your spelling. Very detailed story and I loved the descriptive vocabulary you used in it (words like alcove). Nice work Kaia! The size is a king single. The pots I put my plants in are made out of clay and my photo frames are made out of glass. Although I dont really like the blue on my walls and the colour of my floor so itd be good if that could have a change. After a long day, all i want to do is go up tom my cosy bedroom and either listen to some mellow music, or lie down, unwind and watch a bit of T.V or maybe even a relaxing film. By William Middleton. The colouring is a dark grey frame with translucent drawers. My PS4 is tall and black with a blue light going across it and it has a futuristic look to it. must suck cock. It is a very modern bedroom, with a tropical theme. Very well written. I also enjoy the way that my room is positioned and how it looks (when it's tidy). 10 metaphors to describe a place. The final piece of furniture is a tall drawer set, which contains five drawers worth of clothing. On the floor you may notice a creamy carpet that barely shows its face when it's covered in soft furnishings i.e. I peer out the window and see the light reflecting itself on the lake and the wind creating ripples in the water. 4, I like how you describe where the objects in your room where. Tattoo Aftercare Saniderm, You could add information on what you think about your room and why you like it. It is uses lots of descriptive language but after a comma you have put a capital like never made, One big and you have my bedroom has One build in wardrobe do you mean one built in wardrobe other than that I liked it, You've used punctuation correctly I don't really see any errors but full stops in the right place, capital letters well done. The furniture is a nice light brown. Love Mum x. DOOGIES BEDROOM make sure it's extra creamy!! Islas Bedroom Description The last thing in my room is my bed. But the floor is not the messy thing in my room my wardrobe is, my wardrobe is where all the dirty clothes are that I can't be bothered to put away, when I have to tidy my room so I just put them in my wardrobe. I love my room because you can just sit and read and just play. MY BEDROOM Copyright Dr Paul Enenche 2018-2020. On the wall where my bed is place there is my name, the letters carved in wood and painted in pink with many forms of glitter, sequins and charms all stuck to them. I noticed that one word keep coming up wrong, it was colour. Also there were some little things like having i instead of I that you could of fixed. My room has lots of colour in it. Also my bedroom faces east causing it to be cold a lot. Similes and metaphors create strong imagery when used sparingly. Good job, I like how you described your basketball posters. Really good, some really good descriptive words and I could imagine it really well. cock is like. I do everything in my room, im pretty much always in there. I have a lot of special objects in my bedroom. Your spelling was mostly correct there were just a few words like duvet. Idioms and Metaphors about Having a Good Sleep 8. There is also a built in wardrobe on the opposite wall to the window, above it there is a picture of a mint green kombi van. There isnt tonnes of furniture in my bedroom but I make it work with the room I have, I had the idea of a cabin bed so that i can fit some stuff under it rather than having it crammed up somewhere else. So now you know about my room, I hope you can visualize it and my topics were the furniture, accessories, colors and the layout. I would love to change my bed to a queen bed though. Over all in my room I have lots of wall decorations that are very creative. The touch, it's soft, smooth and warm at night. I have a chair that is very sturdy but comfortable and a table which is birch with white markings and has a curve on the end. It is one of the few places I feel confident to be me and feel as though no-one else can touch me. The story behind this is that ogres are usually thought of as being dirty, smelly, and unkept. Over all it was still one of your best work. My bedroom is a deep freeze. Your story was very descriptive and had good describing words. The first and the best part about my room is the layout. Now to the TV, it's too big! (He is messy.) My bedroom looks, smells and feels great. I liked it how you said you wouldn't change your room and it is a good space to relax. Beside the desk, in pride of place, is my single bed. The pattern is bad, It is a circle and 2 squiggly lines that run beside it and keep doing the same thing until it reaches the roof. As you walk up the old skinny hallway, at the end, opposite the bathroom, you will find a bedroom,which you'd agreed looks like a bomb has gone off and spread all the junk everywhere, and yes its my bedroom, possibly the messiest in the house. The furniture looks comfortable and inviting, as though it is begging for someone to take a seat. My wardrobe layout has all my shoes which i only have two pairs, hanging up are all my nice clothes. You really made me think of what your room would've looked like with your little brothers toy box and with the bog window and the red wall. (The shark's teeth are sharp.) Great writing Shadyn really liked it, I still ant that ps4 of yours though! Love the story love the writer the use of strong, adventurous adjectives eg horrifically untidy, musty, unfresh, and colour descriptions eg bright red, light, creamy, dark coloured are great. My room has lots of storage places to put clothes and stuff in and a big window to look out. I love the furniture in my room it makes it feel as if I am in a dream. But the only bad thing about it is that I have to share it with my 3 year old brother Jackson. These windows also include a door, that leads out into one of three gardens at my house. It has a flexible neck which can turn about 160 degrees, as well as being able to slightly tilt up and down. On the door it has my name (Will) and other things I made in hard materials. Also very comfy mattress and white sheets keep it in peak condition other side of my you. To have an en suite attached to my desk is white the a gray.. 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